good in parts, looks slightly unfinished
I like the details of the horns and the neck area. I think the teeth just don't fit for some reason. the tongue either. I think the tongue wouldn't look like a separate object if you didn't use such a bright blue color in contrast with the red and blacks. Color can change things quite a bit. I like the way you've picked up some of the blood reflecting in his eye as well, that's a good touch. I think you just need to work with this a little more, change the color of the tongue and focus on the mouth/nose area a little bit more. I would probably darken the area under the tongue a little more as well. Good use of a design panel for the background, kind of gives the viewer the feeling of dragons and dark ages. Good work.
To me these guys looked a LOT like the Gosiodo from Singularity 7. And because you've used a similar color scheme to them as well. They pretty much are just black and white with red eyes like the character all the way to the right in the foreground. If you've never read Singularity 7 and this is just a coincidence, well that's great and I like your work. And you should still read Singularity 7. :)
I'll try to look for this book.
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